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	<title>Comments on: What Happened to the Inciting Incident?</title>
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		<title>By: Monica</title>
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		<dc:creator>Monica</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 07 Dec 2010 07:52:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Toots, 20? Really? I&#039;ve never seen that in any book. Not sure which books you&#039;re reading. Around 25-30 is the act 1 break, so page 20 for the inciting incident is way too late. If your script falls in the 101-107 page range, then I would keep it at 5-7. Otherwise, if your script warrants being longer, you could put it at 10 or so. But, really, from the reader&#039;s perspective, keep things clipping along.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Toots, 20? Really? I&#8217;ve never seen that in any book. Not sure which books you&#8217;re reading. Around 25-30 is the act 1 break, so page 20 for the inciting incident is way too late. If your script falls in the 101-107 page range, then I would keep it at 5-7. Otherwise, if your script warrants being longer, you could put it at 10 or so. But, really, from the reader&#8217;s perspective, keep things clipping along.</p>
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		<title>By: Mrtoots</title>
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		<dc:creator>Mrtoots</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 02 Dec 2010 00:35:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Really? Page 5-7? But all the books say Page 20! At the end of the first act!

Page 5???</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Really? Page 5-7? But all the books say Page 20! At the end of the first act!</p>
<p>Page 5???</p>
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