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Comments on: If It Doesn’t Buy You Something, Take It Out http://www.screenwriter-to-screenwriter.com/2009/07/if-it-doesn%e2%80%99t-buy-you-something-take-it-out/ Screenwriting Tips from One Writer to Another Tue, 04 Feb 2014 05:28:21 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=6.4.4 By: Monica http://www.screenwriter-to-screenwriter.com/2009/07/if-it-doesn%e2%80%99t-buy-you-something-take-it-out/comment-page-1/#comment-34651 Sun, 26 Feb 2012 22:26:54 +0000 http://www.screenwriter-to-screenwriter.com/?p=282#comment-34651 In reply to kateh.

Hi, Kate, take a look at the post I wrote on how to introduce your characters to the reader, and then 2 examples of this with the protagonist for Hurt Locker and Erin Brockovich.

As you will note in the comments, everyone has a different preference in how much or what kind of information is best. However, if you look at Oscar screenplay material (and I would argue any well-written script), generally this follows the trend that when the characters hit the page, we meet them in a situation (anecdote) that communicates a ton of information about who they are as a person. It should be active and accurately capture something about the essence of that being.

What should be avoided in any case is unclear or generic information about a character so that it takes 10 pages to get a sense of who that character is. In both Hurt Locker and Erin Brockovich, from the minute these characters are on the page, we KNOW who these people are. We have a deep feeling for them. It is evocative. That is the goal.

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By: kateh http://www.screenwriter-to-screenwriter.com/2009/07/if-it-doesn%e2%80%99t-buy-you-something-take-it-out/comment-page-1/#comment-32882 Sun, 05 Feb 2012 00:10:37 +0000 http://www.screenwriter-to-screenwriter.com/?p=282#comment-32882 Hi,

“Your protagonist should be introduced alone and using an anecdote wherein I will get a clear understanding of who that individual is.”

What do you mean by using an anecdote?

kate

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